On a beach somewhere on a summer’s day…
We really appreciate Erin Keeble’s excellent submission to Voices and entry to the competition. This poem carries a very important message which comes as no surprise as Erin aims to move audiences and ‘capture their minds and hearts’. A student at the University of East Anglia, one of her poems was published in the prestigious ‘Armistice for Schools 100’ poetry competition (judged by Poet Laureate Carol Ann Duffy) and her work has also appeared in UEA’s Art-History Magazine. Erin is a passionate and talented lyricist who often takes part in poetry slams too.
When T Meets B
When T meets B there are firework sparks
T’s eyes dilate, above his beating heart
As he gets closer he begins to see How glamorous B is,
floating free
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Her tall, slim body bathes with grace
The radiant sunlight upon her face
T can feel his body begin to shake
His mind is spinning, he feels wide awake
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B stretches in the water and turns around
That’s it, T’s heart is bound
As B reaches and beckons with her slim white hand
T swims closer to the sand
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He’s nearly there
It’s all too much to bear
As he sees the sunlight coat her cheeks
He shivers and buckles, his knees feel weak
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As B reaches out her slender arm
T is overcome by her charm
He is sure her expression is one of love
Her pale body floating like a dove
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But when their hands lock her nails are sharp
Like the small jagged teeth of a carp
He struggles but now it is too late
The carp has won, it has its bait
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Pain encircles him and he is overcome
His head is hurting, his legs feel numb
He looks once at the ocean before glancing with dread
At the white entrapper spinning her web.
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On a beach somewhere on a summer’s day
Fate dropped B the bag and she washed away
There to stay
And not decay
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Didn’t think of T the turtle swimming by
In the ocean, under the azure sky
It was dawn when he suddenly wondered why
There was something so beautiful floating by
But he had to die
Why?
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Because this love he thought he’d felt so strong
He’d actually got it all very wrong
For B the bag was a web of lies
She had got T the turtle mystified
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Her beautiful exterior and fantastic shape
Hid what lay under her pretty white cape
T the turtle had made a mistake
But he hadn’t realised until too late
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But if B the bag had found B the bin
T wouldn’t have suffered what fate chose for him
And then T would still be swimming, and free
This was the story of when T met B.
Erin Keeble, University of East Anglia, Norwich
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